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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2008-04-22 08:17 AM



Calm becomes the soul
held in moments of cherish
spirits entwining.

Through stillness of night
two hearts whisper on the wind
embracing love's peace.

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2008-04-22 10:20 AM


"embracing love's peace"

that line alone moved me to much thought...conflicting as they might have been (my thoughts not your words)...

I crave for something I just can't get my hands on.  

  

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-04-22 04:35 PM


Lovely thoughts, Donna.
                Ida

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2008-04-22 07:00 PM


soft and sweet, Donna

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passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2008-04-22 08:13 PM


this is precious!
Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
5 posted 2008-04-22 08:20 PM


Beautiful. and elegant.
ilsm
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6 posted 2008-04-22 09:45 PM


Excellent.  I'm glad I found this to read.  Thanks.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-04-22 10:03 PM


Lovely Words

ARCTIC WIND

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2008-04-22 10:14 PM


Very gentle and comforting.  Joyce
shyvl
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9 posted 2008-04-22 10:36 PM


So very  Soothing.  A perfect ending to a hetic day.  Thank you for the pleasure.
sharyn

steavenr
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10 posted 2008-04-22 10:37 PM


"Calm becomes the soul"

how true...how lovely...

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2008-04-22 11:29 PM


i feel the soft spot of your heart whispers here
beautiful verse

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2008-04-23 05:56 AM


Thank you each for slipping in on this one and leaving your thoughts.

You are all appreciated.

Margherita
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Eternity
13 posted 2008-04-23 08:09 AM


I know of love's peace and you, dear Donna, have rendered it with your usual magical touch.

If only we could plunge into this peace more often!

Thank you for this!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

ctowen
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14 posted 2008-04-23 08:19 AM


this speaks loudly to me ....

Keep a smile!  

Ct

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2008-04-24 05:42 AM


Margharita, Craig, thank you both for stoppin by!  
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