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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Haiku Trio 1 Wintery April Ice stays late on northern lakes Loons are impatient 2 Only one warbler in this cold migration Juncos refuse to leave 3 An April wind rattles my bedroom window Uneasy season |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Krawdad, I am so happy you are back! And I love your haiku trio, they capture the mood of nature and the perception of the human heart extremely well. Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Krawdad, thank you! We've had this marvelous little bird visiting us in our new home these last three years, and it was one that I hadn't seen in our other home, even though we live in the same town. I could never remember the correct name for them. I wonder if they stay at this house because here, we've got arbor vitae trees. They seem to hold up there during the winter months, but make wonderful guests at the seed trough. I knew the moment I read your second haiku, that your bird was "our" bird, but I Googled them all the same and Yep! Sigh. Thank you! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brother truer words were never "haikued" I tell you. I think we have really ticked Mother Nature off. It is freezing here too, and normally we would be darn near in full bloom. Lovely trio Krawdad, and again, Happy Birthday to you.  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Always enjoy your writing. Krawdad. Ihave never done a Haiku. I'm going to have to try it. Ida |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wonderful Haiku. Love the read. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Three Haikus makes a great All together poem! This is a wonderful write ARCTIC WIND |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a setting for this beautiful trilogy |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Awesome write… thank you for the visions. Tammy<333 |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice to see you again, krawdad. The syllable counts are off for haikus but the images are nice.....peace. |
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