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My Mercy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It is when you are not near that I hear you the loudest. Oh, how your voice thunders racing through my heart reminding me of sweet memories until a smile is worn upon my lips recalling tender moments, a glance; a kiss. No matter the distance, the time, or the place you are my mercy my saving grace. "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As always, Gentle-Spirited One, I can identify with your eloquent and emotive words. This one has given me pause for reflection, as well. Loving hug, Linda  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful  I know just what you mean. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: How very beautiful, dear Donna! I bet you are the saving grace in return ... love Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful thoughts, Donna. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna, gentle one ~ This almost sings when I read it. Lovely. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well said, Donna. That's really how it is when we remember someone special. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
This write surely touches a heart chord, simply lovely, Donna Sheli |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to you all my fellow pip poets....you amaze me with your kindness. I am blessed to be here among such fine poets and friends!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your words always sing to me Gentle Donna beautifully sad |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your words are always touching ones heart and soul~ My spirit will rise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ Such softness in your quill strokes~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
GS- WOW! very Descriptive words in your beautiful poem here. Somewhat romantic  Enjoyed the Beautiful Romantic piece created here ARCTIC WIND |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
hello nice work |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This was so captivating. I love the way your poetry flows. Truly words from the heart. Thanks for the sharing. sharyn |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Again, my thanks to each of you. |
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