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WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

0 posted 2008-04-19 08:41 PM

To experience a morning in God's love,
it seemed logical to walk the path myriads have trod
in search of this elusive dawn.
And so I went, and oh, surprise!
The path was wide and crowded,
full of curiosity seekers, shoppers and traders
shopping malls and McDonalds and Coca Cola venders
fortune tellers, card readers and analysts,
and Pay phones, compliment of AT&T,
everyone’s version of heaven vying for space…

Confusion and confinement reigned;
curses and cries filled the air
while fights broke out
between those who believed this, not that:
a colourless world, empty of love assailed me
and deep within my heart something said:
"There are greater things beyond this perception,
beyond the common path of the crowds."
but I was afraid of adventure on unfamiliar roads
until a shaft of bright light shot through rainy clouds
and briefly, a luminous rainbow
arched gracefully over dappled fields.

In the rainbow's unmarked path
I saw life as never before seen;
a bold, bright and clean path stretched from view
flanked by green meadows and glittering streams...

God's love is a rare commodity
on the plodded pathways of this world.
You will likely not see it dawn outwardly,
but shining from your heaven within,
you will see it burst forth from the heart.

[This message has been edited by WindWalker (04-19-2008 09:12 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-04-19 08:47 PM

"a bold, bright and clean path stretched from view
flanked by green meadows and glittering streams"

For me, that is the only logical place to discover whatever is beyond the domain of 'human'
never on the beaten paths of organized God-speak.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

2 posted 2008-04-19 11:22 PM

So well written.
"You will likely not see it dawn outwardly,
but shining from your heaven within,
you will see it burst forth from the heart."
Your own heart speaks with depth. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-19 11:30 PM

Absolutely wonderful!!! love your writing.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-04-20 04:34 PM

Your words always strike a special cord with me WindWalker. I understand axactly where you are coming from and feel a spiritual kinship to you.
Ida

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

5 posted 2008-04-20 11:19 PM

WindWalker, this is absolutely gorgeous… Thank you for sharing it.

Tammy<333

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-04-21 12:32 PM

Nice writing...yes it was the love in the heart of Jesus that was shared outwardly and fueled him inwardly to endure the suffering of the cross while possessing a heart of love and compassion...James

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2008-04-21 01:58 PM

WW - Again you touch on certain truth and I thank you for that.

Helen

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