Open Poetry #42 |
clouds |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Where do you go ? Clouds stop to cry for never reaching the wind. stop to seek the dreams of the trees. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
>.> I don't get it :[ |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wonderful. Very philosophical. very nice. (and it is nice to talk to clouds like this ) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I love this Yann... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
What a wonderful use of language so expressive and yet simplistic. Thank you for sharing sharyn |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you Roniece and Sharyn for your kind comments, it's nice to hear about you. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you seoul and x3 tr3 yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love it!! I could spend the whole day lieing in the grass and just watching the clouds pass by, letting my thoughts drift along ... oh, and the feeling they convey when we fly above them! I imagine to jump into their softness ... Thank you for this, dear Yann! This is a keeper for me! Love and cloud hugs. Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
whith such a comment, I will spend a nice day too....I love also cumulo nimbus wandering in a blue sky during spring or summer... Thank you Margherita hugs yann |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
The thing that makes the Gettysburg address so impressive is the fact that Lincoln says so much in so few words. Nice work Rick Delmonico |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The Words all together make such a poetic story told. I really enjoyed this wonderful poetic dream like write! ARCTIC WIND |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you rick, thank you AW i'm sincerily touched by your supporting comments... have a nice day yann |
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