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Open Poetry #42
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Khe Iem
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since 2007-10-14
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0 posted 2008-04-19 11:15 AM


Khe Iem

CALLING SOFTLY

sweeping trash
leaning on a broom

not leaving a speck of dust behind

reflecting
releasing
seeking                          

calling softly
to desolation
© Copyright 2008 Khe Iem - All Rights Reserved
Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-04-19 11:25 AM

nice.
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2008-04-19 11:31 AM

I like your poem.

  yann
shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
3 posted 2008-04-19 11:46 PM

This was nicely woven.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-04-20 07:55 AM

By calling softly ... you might find serenity instead of desolation.

We are always seeking, yes that is so true.

Love,
Margherita
Khe Iem
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since 2007-10-14
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5 posted 2008-04-20 12:41 PM

Thanks, Seoulair, 2islander2, Sharyn, Margherita, for your comments. Khe Iem
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