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Mystical Valley |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 Mystical Valley Beyond the mist and across the sea, there is a land of fantasy. Beautiful rays from a warm, spring sun, beam down on me in this land of fun. Mermaids swimming along the bay, splashing and laughing this bright, sunny day. Butterflies float in the cloudless sky, displaying colors as they pass by. I sit on a rock while writing this poem, as I share with you, my home-sweet-home. ARCTIC WIND [This message has been edited by Artic Wind (04-12-2008 08:09 PM).] |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh this is incredibly wonderful… Thank you for sharing your mystical home. Tammy<333 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Michael.. this is just wonderful.. I like the visual you have gifted me ...  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
wonderful i love it JJ |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
Oh how inspiring!!!! As I try to write this reply, I keep having to delete my words because I'm replying with my own poem. I would not dare trounce on your space! However, I will glean your spirit for future regurgitation of my nautical days of freedom and peace. Thank you for the breath of fresh air! V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. I only partially agree With Virtual Abyss Michael, you know me Not one an opportunity to miss So into your poetry I will throw this spanner For you cannot reach me From the Mountains of Montana This poem was really Quite good my friend The problem I see Is a verse missing from the end The vision you paint Is oh so serene So how come you ain’t Made reference to the coca bean? It’s Sounds like a beautiful place Full of peace & tranquility And I know you are sat filling your face Beneath the chocolate tree… . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Michael, this is sooooooooooo lovely and the picture with the unicorn ohhhhh ... thank you for this journey into harmony and peace and joy and beauty! Wonderful indeed, nice to linger for a while ... Love, Margherita |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Thank you for the lovely dream and moment of escape. Nice of you to share sharyn |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Purest dreams, play the flute of your muse. Enjoyed. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Larrys mom- Thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
RDB- Thank you so much ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Hidden Smiles thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Virtual Abyss thank ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Effjayel- you did your homework lol Thank you so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
shvl- Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Thisdiamond Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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