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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2008-04-18 09:59 PM

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Perhaps
If I’m thin enough
Some one
Will love me just enough
To save me
From my self


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-04-18 10:09 PM

Yo John,

You're the wise guy, with this wise poem.  God help us all.

Bobby
Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
2 posted 2008-04-18 10:16 PM

break the mirror to release "me" from "myself".

yep. smart poem.
Have a wonderful weekend, dear John.
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-04-21 01:05 PM

You handle a serious subject very well here, John.
                               Ida
Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
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Florida, USA
4 posted 2008-04-21 01:43 PM

This is excellent John!

Tammy<333
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