My Final Poem for My Girl, Sarah.

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Open Poetry #42

My Final Poem for My Girl, Sarah.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-04-20 09:54 AM

Her very beautiful hair,
and her undeniable touch
leaves me without care
and love flows through my veins with a rush.

Her voice echo's in my ear,
her body resembles a goddess
she is the person I hold dear
and no, I am not being modest.

When I talk,
to her sometimes
I feel like I'm walking
on the clouds of time
and nothing is in
my unseen path
untouched by sin
and we both sit, and laugh.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-04-20 10:37 AM

very touching indeed...Love is not about modesty I think...

Thanks

yann

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-04-20 07:26 PM

Angel,

This is a very nice poem. Say hello to Sarah.

Bobby

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-04-20 07:33 PM

This is a very beautiful poem Angel...

Tammy<333

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-04-21 12:40 PM

Enjoyed...James

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

5 posted 2008-04-21 11:16 AM

Thank you for the positive feedback :]

Sarah is coming over my house today ^.^

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