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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-17 05:00 AM

On The Line

Today I'll push the cares
of my world away from me.
I'm going to Waikiki to enjoy
the warm waters, the sand,
the surf and the sun,
to participate in all the
fun that she offers me.
Riding the pounding surf I'm
catching every wave I can.
Laying upon the beach
I'm soaking up a golden tan.
Off in the distance I
hear soothing ukulele's
Beach bunnies lay beside me
charming me with their company.
From my beach bag a
persistant cell phone chimes.
On the line, its my boss wanting to
tell me to come in to work some overtime.

JamesLee
17April
2008

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-04-17 07:07 AM

I don't have cell phone and get a lot of perks with  that...

Very fine poem with sunny beaches...
Made me dream...

    thanks

   yann

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-04-17 11:22 AM

enjoyed this James

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

3 posted 2008-04-17 12:18 PM

Dreaming here as well, Can I go too?

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

4 posted 2008-04-17 12:28 PM

Good boss.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

5 posted 2008-04-17 04:41 PM

Next time leave the cell phone at home--The moments described here are to wonderful to miss.
sharyn

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2008-04-17 06:37 PM

JamesMichael~
And knowing you ... you're smart enough
to not answer~
Enjoy the day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-04-17 08:13 PM

smiles... ah James, you have a wonderful life!

enjoyed .. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

8 posted 2008-04-17 09:57 PM

Oh it was awesome till that last line… Turn off the phone!!! Hahaha wonderful write.

Tammy<333

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

9 posted 2008-04-24 10:58 AM

This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

10 posted 2008-04-24 01:51 PM

oh the beach.. im so glad the weathers getting warmer I'll be swimming soon

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

11 posted 2008-04-24 02:51 PM

James,

This sounds like a good time to use my--

"Sorry, you've reach a number that is no longer in use. If you wish to make a call--

Bobby

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