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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Paris… so many things in nooks and crannies you can’t share. are kisses wandering on the benches or romance flagging above river boats, ask them the question. The cars cram everywhere and pedestrians mimic them. Even the birds feel insane when they fly in the sky all above Notre Dame, Nevertheless, to be a tourist is a good job. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I have written this after seeing a wonderful film from cedric Klapish called Paris.... I hope Roniece will not be disapointed by the ironic look.... yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...but of course to the tourist each moment is an adventure and hopefully a pleasure...James |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
many novel imagery. lots of interesting scenes. nice work. sharyn |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles..... Yann, I am going to see that movie next week!  I liked your view of Paris.. not disappointed at all..I'm looking forward to being a 'parisienne' in Septembre! though I'm sure everyone will see me as a 'tourist' still! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"romance flagging above river boats(!)"... quite interesting imagery in this piece! applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Paris seems like a wonderful place to be and I like the way you describe it, yann. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yann, I've always rather liked Paris. I never felt like a stranger there--and neither did Felix. I bought an inexpensive fountain pen there. It spilled ink all over me. No one made a fuss. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very wise comment James, i appreciate and it gives distance with the poem... thanks yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you sharyn... Thank you Roniece, i'm really sure you will enjoy to be a parisian girl during september, there are so many things to do... have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Bruce and Ida for your supporting comments...I never forget reading your fine poetry... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you bobby and sorry with the pen, i'm pleased you enjoyed Paris... yann |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Until now, I’ve never been to Paris… Thank you for taking me… Awesome write. Tammy<333 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Tammy, I'm glad you appreciate the little poetic trip. I share too reading your poem Have a very nice day yann |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Very lovely. I likeed the verse "Even the birds feel insane when they fly in the sky" They must have dropped extra feathers on ladies hat. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you seoul for your kind comments. Also i apreciated very much your humour : extra feathers on ladies hat, that's great, made me smile... yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, I really like this and I knew Roniece would love it before I opened it. Good job - very lovely. A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Alison thank you for your lovely comment, it's nice sharing with you. yann |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Ah, to be in Paris in springtime! You have moved me to wish to be in Paris at anytime! I enjoyed this immensely. Art |
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