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Spring Dawn
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Spring Dawn |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Spring dawn In the dwindling moonlight just before dawn, listen close… to the music of life’s reawakenings, and you may glimpse all the grand new hopes, dreams, and promises, (that dance with the furtive, fleeting shadows) veiled in the misty breath of such a fine Spring morning. --- b. e. adams (4/11/08) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
That sounds wonderful but I'm a terrible insomniac and I'm sleeping like a baby around that time. Now I'm going to have to decide, Do I stay up or get up? Not often mind you. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yep, that's when the rowdy robins start their 'happy' tunes serenade, which is OK weekdays, not much fun Saturday morning. Oh, this is a fine write, makes me want to get up at 5 AM. (maybe) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I'm breathless...It smells both like a perfume and a painting... yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is very lovely. Spring mornings before dawn are interesting here in the hood. Many times I'm awakened by the thump-thump of a basketball across the street in the playground--a Felix coming back from a late night "appointment". Unbelievably, you've captured that. I like it. God bless us all. Bobby |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This was a lovely piece. It had a warm feel and made me feel as if I were there. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Most beautiful, dear Bruce. I love to wake up by these dawn sounds, but then I'd love to go on sleeping a little bit, also because early morning dreams are best remembered ... Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
In the dwindling moonlight...." Wonderfully Written! ARCTIC WIND |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
very nice write. Hugs Kimberly |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
Another beautiful poem, you create some amazing images in your work |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
How did you know, I so needed this...(smiles) wonderful poetry! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! this morning was cloudy cold and rainy not like Spring at all but I got my day from this poem! |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
I will be waking early to for this… Gorgeous. Tammy<333 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very very lovely!!!! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
I love damp misty early mornings, this makes me feel just like that... |
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