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ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-04-10 03:53 PM

You are the brother of my dreams
In Parris Island becoming a marine
I absolutely hope you exceed
For you not is the last thing you need

I have been doing pretty good
Just missing you like any sister should
For me to write you letters
Is the only way to make me better

I adore writing poetry about you
Even though I am fairly new
It always gets my feelings out
Whatever I am thinking about

I cannot wait until you come back
You are the only thing in life I lack
But when you come to visit here
It will be loving memories I hold near

[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (04-10-2008 07:56 PM).]

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

1 posted 2008-04-10 04:36 PM

Hey Jess, you are getting good at this. I told you that you would didn't I? So, did you laminate the 1st one like I said & give it to him? Goodly job young Lady, BTW, you all better after wrecking the car now?

John

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

2 posted 2008-04-10 07:12 PM

Haha, yes you did tell me. I actually did not laminate it because you had told me after I gave it to him. I wanted to though. And yes, I do feel better. I still have to go to physical therapy a few times, but I feel much better.
Jess

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

3 posted 2008-04-10 08:59 PM

Nice tribute. Wish you well, and keep posting if that is what gets you through

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-04-10 09:04 PM

Nice write

JJ

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

5 posted 2008-04-10 09:17 PM

Jess, this is so beautiful… It truly tells how very much you love your brother… Awesome

Tammy<333

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

6 posted 2008-04-10 10:40 PM

Thank you. It's not my best, but it did come from my heart.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-04-11 02:35 AM

Jess... darling girl, you have indeed written this from your heart.. thank you for sharing with us... I do hope you share this with your brother.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

8 posted 2008-04-13 02:47 AM

love the read. good.

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