Open Poetry #42 |
As Time Passes Bye, (For Larry's Mom) |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
As we grow older And hair turns to gray, Our thoughts and our bodies, Change in some ways. A friend or a loved one, Is gone leaving grief, But they leave us with memories, That touch us so deep. The soul never dies, Nor memories depart, They talk to you daily, And live on in your heart. Time brings one healing, It takes quite a while But their soul lives within you And will soon bring a smile. May God bring you peace, May your heart quickly mend, May your tears turn to laughter Till you're together again. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Amen. A |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aw, ToeMan~ You are a sweetheart~ Tammy will find peace in this penning~ God bless ya', Toe~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I haven't seen this side of you before, Toe I'm impressed. Ida |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
'Bama Man, that is a damned fine piece of work. You nailed it my friend,I'm sure Tammy will love it. Thanks for writing & posting it...John |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very sweet |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
nicely done, and together they will be someday. That's where you find strength waiting for that glorious day!!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
That's one sensitive toe. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Careful there, my friend. *S* Posting a poem like this is gonna show everyone how big your heart is... though I think most of us already know. *S* Absolutely beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So soft and sincere...James |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
That's two for you Toe. Really nice work. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Dear Toerag, Your beautiful, beautiful words have brought me to tears my friend… Beautiful, mending tears. I know your words are true… Thank you so much, from the bottom of my heart, thank you… Tammy<333 |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Amazing and wonderful. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Toe.. thank you for your beautiful healing words for our friend Tammy.... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wonderful poem. Kind words from heart. Very good!!! |
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Good Man Gone Better New Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 3 |
I was reading it and ended up thinking of my granny....the poem touch me in a very special way...thanks. P.S - i just signed up to piptalk a few hours ago...glad I wasn't lazy and kept continuing to read. ~Good Man Gone Better~ |
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