Open Poetry #42 |
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an extra ordinary day |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Some bring me fruit and flowers. Every day's an anecdote. A cautious tassel on our drapes reveals the sunlight antidote. I strong-arm the door for them - a growling Annie's by my side. Ever-eager Freddy is consigned to terrier, again. "My Hero --Alpha Dog!!" I lie. "I am, " he whines. I laugh.He sighs. "Of course you are." pat-pat-him-sweet He wags the rug in smug placation. Friends are different these days - orbs are present in their eyes. A haunting to be sure, I know, I look at them and say goodbye. Silently acknowledging I can't correct what has transpired. So I wish them well as they walk their narrow, spindle-gait There be dragons that prevail I lock the door - security, and I decide to sweep the floor. Superstitiously--bad luck-- Take that with you, Mutha-wruck! I will pray this day away. Love is in the flickering tealights and my potpourri bubbles in the caldron we keep hidden by the ficus tree that twinkles with blue lights. Nothing's on the stove tonight. The cat is dying quietly. "Layla" makes the pain alright and Clapton is great company singing sad sobriety of one too many anecdotes. Grief sings out the sixteenth note and I am silenced by the weight of memories I'd thought remote: extra ordinary days... * * * Since I have regaled you all so many times with stories of my misadventures, I thought I'd share a quiet day with you all. And a wink to R.J.-"wruck" is a word. With a *wink* and love to all |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A nice tea of extraordinary grace. ![]() Enjoyed as much, each sip I took! |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
OH this is beutifuly awesome!!! I love this... It makes me smile and almost sad to. Tammy<333 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the drive by in your life and times. Your writing is so often like a road trip that carries the reader along. It speeds up and slows down accordingly, leaving the reader to breathe in the scenery. Fascinating poem, serenity. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Karen... lovely Karen... this is a compelling and awesome read! I'm saving it to my library to read again... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*cough* wouldn't it be lovely if we each contributed "a day" here? to share is to gift. Thank you Karen. ![]() "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed sharing you extraordinary day. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine 'write!'... "Love is in the flickering tealights" [I'm glad to hear it is somewhere!...] applause for this 'penning!' |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thinking of you my Ser....wish I could be there to keep you company. But if a quiet day produces poetry like this, I guess it's good I'm not. Hugs.....jojo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...ya'll are so sweet to me. thanks for being kind--my writer's muse is still being a boogeyman, so I had to take my inspiration in the ordinary. I hope this wasn't too boring for you guys. Some days, I just..."chill". ![]() Ya'll get some sleep now. ![]() |
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