Open Poetry #42 |
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Roam |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Roam Invisible, silent energy that magnifies its presence Haunting the fringe of the fire in a whispers tease Meandering, the white blown blue then blushed Symmetrical moans linger on in jubilant echo I turn, east to west in a rattan dish Pour beyond the door, in dampened darkness Leaning an ear into the rain dancing Cotton soft, to hem of warmth, thin woven around me Muse, the music of flute exhaled sweetly Builds in my pulse to epilogue, sheer and close Your words and diction, gentle friction on my skin Traveling the bounds of curiosity to light again I wonder Are you thinking what I’m thinking? The contradiction of fire and water speaks In a language, we have honed kinetic peaks Subtlety of touch, magnifies as much the flame When the night calls out to me, your name Copyright Kkh 4/10/08 |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very nice, you write such elegant words. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Such beauty in these words… this is gorgeous. Tammy<333 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling wide--you must be drinking chamomile too! We seem to be on the same mellow page. That first stanza, I thought, wow, Kathleen's doing qui gong! ![]() Totally suits me mood, too. It's been too long, m'friend. And you really should bottle your poetry. It's engagingly melllllllllllllow! ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
you sway me in a good way, TD~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine imagery!: “Invisible...energy… Haunting the fringe of the fire in a whispers tease”; “the music of flute exhaled sweetly”; “The contradiction of fire and water speaks”; Applause! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely poem, Kathleen. Especially liked the last verse.....*hugs*....jo |
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