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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana ![]() |
How do you put the pieces together when part of the puzzle is lost forever to go on with life never seems quite fair knowing your loved one is no longer there One step at a time each foot finds the ladder climbing up and away from a heart that has shattered each memory so precious you try to hold near fearing they'll fade with each passing year replaying the face that held such sweetness brings forth the sorrow and moments of weakness it's still to soon to understand just why of all those in the world, why our little guy? Life slowly goes on since we laid him to rest Our comfort is knowing God takes only the best |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Good job Kris, you summed that up so perfectly...Welcome to Passions, I look forward to reading more of your work. John |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
John-Thank you kindly, I have been away for a few weeks. I work 2 jobs but every chance I get, I'm here!!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful and touching, Kris. I know you feel, I feel the same way. Ida |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
I know you do Ida, Thanks for your sweetness. May you continue to stay strong |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A fine expression of the thoughts from your heart...James |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Dear K-K, You have brought me to tears... How TRUE your words are, oh how VERY, VERY TRUE my dear friend... Please know that if you EVER need to talk, scream, cry or vent I am only an email away... Lots of love to you, Tammy<333 |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Beautiful writing filled with emotion. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very poignant poem, dear Kris. It seems there is no satisfying answer ever to the "Why?" in these cases. In keeping the bond of love alive there is hope to cope with life. Love and light. Margherita |
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