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The Time Of Your Life, (So Live For Today)
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The Time Of Your Life, (So Live For Today) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I KNOW, IT'S TOO LONG FOR MOST TO READ, BUT.... as most of ya know...I never or rarely ever get serious about anything....but, reading some of the posts here makes even toerags ponder life and such....(you know, feel sorry for yourself, think about loved ones and friends that have come and gone thru out our short time here etc.), so,this is a conglomeration of old stuff, here's the last serious crap you'll see from me... The poet has said for many a day That time is a thief who steals hours away and takes the blush from the cheek, The sparkle from the eye, A little of all as time passes bye. Time takes the bright luster from the hair, Steals the gold, but leaves silver there Gone hearty laughter, the youthful sounds But when I think of my blessings Great joy abounds. A springy step isn't there to see, Time exchanged it for poise and dignity, (Yea right, from Toerag?) Where once I ran, I now will walk My best performances Are now only talk. Time gives one vision of yester-year, Hard to recall without a tear, Temporal were the things time took from me, I've had so many joys And paid a small fee. Life's not simple, all ups and downs, Joys and sorrows, smiles and frowns. I've had both, but lately it seems, The frown and sorrows, encompass my dreams. My friends and family, are mostly gone, Memories of past, have haunted so long. I ponder my life, as I've reached middle age, Is this the final chapter?..Should I write another page? Listen to experience, the mesaage I send, The valuable things, that this short life gives, Are the laughter and love, From family and friends. If they told me I may be dying, I really couldn't complain I had two parents that loved me (most of the time) And satisfaction few attain. I've brought life into this world, I've taken life away too, The first was truly a blessing Hope the other won't happen to you. I've gained wealth with money, I can purchase material things, Can't take any with me Nor the pleasures that they bring. I've seen my children grow healthy, Their laughter and joys and tears, God they grew so quickly, What happened to all the years? True wealth's not counted in money, It's not what you have in the banks, The love of your family, the friends that are dear Is the wealth deserving of "thanks" [This message has been edited by Toerag (04-10-2008 06:29 PM).] |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Excellent..Excellent EXCELLENT!!!! What a good poem, I enjoyed this one deeply  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. quote: Toe this is your best yet And that is no bull I now consider my debt Paid up in full You have become a good friend Since I discovered these pages at Pip And if you are still here at my end Please don’t give me any “Lip” I admire your prowess You have earned my respect If you are impressed Do not give me thanks Just send me a cheque I know how you feel about banks... (I Love Ya really!  ) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hope you don't hold to that threat to make this your last serious posting. *S* For not all your friends are gone... and this one appreciates your heart even more than your humor. *S* And... this might be just what I've been waiting for... I've spent quite enough time feeling sorry for myself, right? *S* Thanks for the inspiration... I might just lumber back into living. *S* Beautiful work, dear friend! |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
You can say that again. We all need to slow down and remember what's important Very good |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Excellent write Toe, great sentiments. You don't have to worry buddy, you are rich in friends here. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
YES! YES! YES!!!!! OH THIS IS SO GORGEOUS, BEAUTIFUL, AND INCREDIBLY TRUE ALL WRAPPED IN ONE… This is what life is about. This makes me feel happy and brings bog smiles. Thank you for this… Tammy<333 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are playing my song sweetheart.  I hope I die laughing.  love you and you be well m'friend.  |
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shazz4life New Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 1Czech republic Prague |
What more can one say.this is nothing but a beautiful piece of work. i really did enjoy it. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yanno, I kinda promised the next life to someone else but I am willing to bump them for you! I absolutely loved this dearest Toe! and you too."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Toe... you are brilliant! I love this my friend... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yes, an incredible write. ...Where once I ran, I now will walk My best performances Are now only talk... This is also true for me. Thanks, Melton |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I always knew behind the silly words their beat a heart of gold. The warmth was not hidden or the caring for your fellowman. This is lovely Mr. Toerag you have shared. I would love to add just one thing. The luster from ones hair that was once a golden treasure now has turned to silver dust.You can remedy that dear poet with CLARIOL. Good jobber Mr. Toerag. Hugs BonBon  |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
Had to read this one again, so good!!!! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
This is so good I'm going to have it for lunch with a double martini or two!  Splendid work, Art |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Amen to all that, Toe! Enjoyed....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are quite the wise man, dear Toerag!! I love every word of this beautiful and touching poem.  I will keep it, so that I can read it when I get the blues ... life is a precious gift, even when we have to endure some hardships. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, you should write another page, we shall until we travel on, to the other page...until then, we get to do it over and over, with our now minds you know.... such an effective and glorious write.... thank you Lee J. |
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