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Open Poetry #42

proper in double park

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-04-09 05:49 AM

gypsy whisper dawning
I watch your eye side rising
and am still the quiet dark

you will speak of fear then
when my shadow does not pass you
and will run in your white shoes

to dance the other mountains
the day will be your laughter
and the evening your honey cone

you will be proper patience
in recline for the rotogravure
with buttons in gospel rows

and I am still the quiet dark

_____________

daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-04-09 08:01 AM

and I am still the quiet dark

... but you do reveal your colors in your wondrous poetry for us to enjoy.

Perfect!

Love,
Margherita

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-09 11:28 AM

very good. love the read.
In dark we dream and pray.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-04-09 11:46 AM

quote:
to dance the other mountains
the day will be your laughter
and the evening your honey cone

It's always wonderful to fly home
when my eyes welcome your words.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-04-09 07:14 PM

Mr Daark... you make me want...

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-04-09 07:44 PM

VERY descriptive! Dark Stranger

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-04-11 08:59 PM

*bump*

I do like this Mr Daark...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

7 posted 2008-04-12 06:24 PM

This is makes me feel like midnight…

Tammy<333

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-04-14 11:28 AM

D

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"to dance the other mountains
the day will be your laughter"
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I love these lines so much it almost hurts. What a beautiful poem and I want these two lines to hold forever.

A

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