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My metamorphosis.
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My metamorphosis. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
A hardened man turns into sand, And blows away in the wind. An emotionless rock begins to bleed, And the blood is black. There is no going back, no need to stop, For this indestructible diamond, has cracked. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You're growing up and learning to be mature and compassionate. I see it happening. congratulations. Ida |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
And it is a wonderful thing…  Beautiful write. Tammy<333 |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
powerful images with meaning for us all. sharyn |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
xTr3m3sT I am so glad that you stayed with us. I love how your writing is evolving. It's a mirror to show your heart -- and yes, you are growing. Alison |
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