Open Poetry #42 |
Them 'Pome' Righters |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
How 'bout them rhyme makers, Ain't they fine? Puttin' down words Makin' them rhyme. Them dadburn poet types Showin' they skill Some use a keyboard Others use a quill Talkin' 'bout love Relatin' to sorrow Writin' it now Readin' it tomorrow Them ever-lovin' poet writers Ain't they neat? Writin' them words With rhythm and beat Think about a subject If ya find the muse Like I did fer this'un Did it just for youse! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. Yanno Toe You are a clever guy Always making us laugh And occasionally cry.... You are one of the best on here (Almost as good as Balladeer) Keep it up & who can tell One day you may be as good as Effjayel.... . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ToeMan~ I just love ya' to pieces~ You are a good rhymer, all right~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Woderful use of rhythm and rhymn(spelling?) "How 'bout them rhyme makers, Ain't they fine? Puttin' down words Makin' them rhyme." I am a little envious of your skill. This was lots of fun to read. sharyn |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Keep us laughing, Toe. Ida |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
So glad you did a pome for usin' folks. We shor do appreciate yur fine edukated words. Hugs BonBon |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I laff til I cry when I read what you right. That's so cute. Rae |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
I like it. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh this is wonderful!!!! Thank you so much for the smile. Tammy<333 |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
ha ha like it too JJ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Toe..you brings smiles to me everytime I read you .. thank you love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Us pome-writers are in a class by ourselves, Sharper than marbles and cuter than elves. How much better can pome writing get when done by people so articulet? Us pome-writers are special, that's fer sure The field of poetry fertilized by our manure. You and me, Toe, are topnotch story tellers And even Effjayel is a real fort smeller. Keep on writing yore pottery, old buddy, when you can Kick the rules of grammer around like a rusty ole tin can. Anyone can write like Shakespeare...that ain't hard to do. But there ain't no "old masters" who can do it quite like you! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you guys are a hoot, thanks so much for the enjoyable witty read and tribute... Lee J. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very lovely. enjoyed. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL, well now ... I popped in hoping for a smile, and when I saw your name I knew you'd deliver Toe! Thanks for the grins. Pretty soon, I think my life will finally be settling down enough to get back here and spend some quality time with all you "rhyme makers". Might even find my quill! Loved this Toe! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
When I saw you using "they" for "their" I knew I was in for a wild ride! You is a master of light verse! Art |
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