Open Poetry #42 |
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Them 'Pome' Righters |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
How 'bout them rhyme makers, Ain't they fine? Puttin' down words Makin' them rhyme. Them dadburn poet types Showin' they skill Some use a keyboard Others use a quill Talkin' 'bout love Relatin' to sorrow Writin' it now Readin' it tomorrow Them ever-lovin' poet writers Ain't they neat? Writin' them words With rhythm and beat Think about a subject If ya find the muse Like I did fer this'un Did it just for youse! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. Yanno Toe You are a clever guy Always making us laugh And occasionally cry.... You are one of the best on here (Almost as good as Balladeer) Keep it up & who can tell One day you may be as good as Effjayel.... . |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ToeMan~ I just love ya' to pieces~ You are a good rhymer, all right~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Woderful use of rhythm and rhymn(spelling?) "How 'bout them rhyme makers, Ain't they fine? Puttin' down words Makin' them rhyme." I am a little envious of your skill. This was lots of fun to read. sharyn |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Keep us laughing, Toe. Ida |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
So glad you did a pome for usin' folks. We shor do appreciate yur fine edukated words. Hugs BonBon ![]() |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I laff til I cry when I read what you right. That's so cute. Rae |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
I like it. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh this is wonderful!!!! Thank you so much for the smile. ![]() Tammy<333 |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
ha ha like it too JJ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Toe..you brings smiles to me everytime I read you .. thank you ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Us pome-writers are in a class by ourselves, Sharper than marbles and cuter than elves. How much better can pome writing get when done by people so articulet? Us pome-writers are special, that's fer sure The field of poetry fertilized by our manure. You and me, Toe, are topnotch story tellers And even Effjayel is a real fort smeller. Keep on writing yore pottery, old buddy, when you can Kick the rules of grammer around like a rusty ole tin can. Anyone can write like Shakespeare...that ain't hard to do. But there ain't no "old masters" who can do it quite like you! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you guys are a hoot, thanks so much for the enjoyable witty read and tribute... Lee J. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very lovely. enjoyed. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL, well now ... I popped in hoping for a smile, and when I saw your name I knew you'd deliver Toe! ![]() Thanks for the grins. Pretty soon, I think my life will finally be settling down enough to get back here and spend some quality time with all you "rhyme makers". Might even find my quill! ![]() Loved this Toe! ![]() Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
When I saw you using "they" for "their" I knew I was in for a wild ride! You is a master of light verse! Art |
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