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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
with love comes pain with tears comes heartaches with dreams comes reality with life comes choices with choices comes mistakes with mistakes comes regret regret will never leave you unless you accept the change JJ [This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-04-2008 11:44 PM).] |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
These are words of wisdom so beautifully said. Art |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed your thoughts...you might want to change the spelling for "reality" and "accept"...also not sure if you wanted to use the word "heartaches" instead of "head aches"...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
interesting poem, i liked what you said... yann |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
philosophical. love the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed love this! |
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sarlou Junior Member
since 2008-03-23
Posts 16burnley,lancashire,england |
beautiful poem nothing more to be said |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely gifting here... I have very few regrets in my life to date...  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
JJ, The idea is there. Here are a few spelling corrections for you. "with love comes pain with tears comes heartaches with dreams comes realiaty (reality) with life comes choices with choices comes mistakes with mistakes comes regret regret will never leave you unless you exsept (accept) the change" It's good always to accept the change. Bobby |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
thank you very much, all of you JJ |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
your comments are very great JJ |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
words of wisdom. very impressive Belinda~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done M |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Truth in each line. Well wrought. It was a pleasure to read. sharyn |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
thank you all very much JJ |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
glad you enjoyed the read JJ |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
Cool! Thanks. V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes it is so important that we are open to changes and accept them fully. Good write. Love, Margherita |
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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35 |
wow i really love this poem *****dreamer***** |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
i enjoyed this very much BugBuggy |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
Very wise words. Enjoyed Claira |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
well thought out to provoke thoughts well -- nicely done |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
JJ, So true. Very well put. Thank you! V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some wise thoughts that you share with us. Thank you. A |
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