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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2008-04-05 02:41 AM



and the little boy said,"Look I've caught the wind", and in the grass was a cage of brass, where the breeze gently cascaded.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


© Copyright 2008 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-04-05 02:46 AM


Amelia, Amelia, Amelia.

You are still pure joy.

I saw it.

I did!

thank you lovie

Your visits here are all too brief, but always lovely. You are kinda like spotting a "falling star".


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-04-05 02:57 AM


Amelia... such a beautiful name! and such a beautiful write... I hope to read more of you lovely poet!..   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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3 posted 2008-04-05 03:43 AM


I always wondered what color the wind was, now I think I know...Nice wrie Amelia.  Jhhn
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4 posted 2008-04-05 08:17 AM


oh, this is perfect imagery, Amelia! I felt the breeze on my face.
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5 posted 2008-04-05 08:28 AM


Redheart Angrybraids,

The imagination is a great gift—nice words.

Bobby

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6 posted 2008-04-05 09:04 AM


RedHeartAngryBraids~
Amelia, it is SO GOOD to see you here~
I agree with Karen ... hope you will *gift* us more often with your poetic thoughts~

Lovely, so lovely is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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7 posted 2008-04-05 09:44 AM


YES!! It's great to get to read you again!!

I could see it too

very much enjoyed!

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8 posted 2008-04-05 09:48 AM


Well, welcome home, little one! What a delightful "see"!




Seoulair
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9 posted 2008-04-05 03:28 PM


lovely.
1slick_lady
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10 posted 2008-04-07 08:38 PM


yes i see it
what a great talent you are
stay around for awhile

you just make me want to hug you

Marchmadness
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11 posted 2008-04-08 02:41 AM


This is most interestig, I like it.
                              Ida

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12 posted 2008-04-08 04:33 AM


Nice...James
Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2008-04-08 05:51 AM


ms red....yes!!  
Susan Caldwell
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14 posted 2008-04-08 08:04 AM


you are the rare gem....

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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15 posted 2008-04-08 08:46 AM


children are amazing people and the poet can gleen a lot from them.


Margherita
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16 posted 2008-04-08 11:32 AM


Delightful, creative thought!

Love,
Margherita

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17 posted 2008-04-09 12:42 PM


beautiful
redheart angrybraids
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18 posted 2008-04-11 01:55 AM


aloha folks,
thank you for all the feed back, it always makes me feel great to check in with ya'll.
much thanks
love kindly

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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