Open Poetry #42 |
Pressed |
redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
Rusted red buds blowing in the sparkling white mid- night gown. Treasured by the tree limbs held solid brown, pressed to the blue sky. Kindly, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
my goodness Amelia! your words are filled with beauty! lovely work here... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I was hoping you would give us another... This one had an asian feel to it, so delicate. You delight me. May Pip have an Amelia meteor shower tonight! (er..this morning) *chuckling* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, I love your vision! Truly delightful! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
one of those places I must journey to with my slow shoes on n-joyed |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Redheart angrybraids, This is well written. I like the way it's arranged. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You have a way with words, Amelia. Ida |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amelia~ You dance words to a tune of their own~ BEAUTIFUL this .... so lovely you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem reads like a gentle caress on a warm breeze. It skims the surface with subtle impact, and is felt deeply. I really enjoyed reading this. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
WOW!!! Beautiful... Tammy<333 |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful - truly beautiful, Amelia. Alison PS - I love this name too -- redheart angrybraids |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful and soft. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
breathtaking |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
much love and peace to you all. thank you. Kindly, |
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