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Down Pour |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Down Pour I am the water deep and wide liquid in the fluid ride cool and warm in your touch flowed through fingers within clutch tears have formed a salty sea it and earth composes me I have fallen to call it rain drops unite tender green obtained "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
a beautiful breath-long poem. Love the read, as always. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn I love you! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
yes, you are beautiful! R |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I envy the water, the way it can touch your entire body all at the same time.... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Simply Exquisite.... John |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
You have given new meaning to the rain… Tammy<333 |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
good write JJ |
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