Open Poetry #42 |
Cade |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Will you be my Guardian Angel and will you watch over me? Will you whisper dreams in my ear? I will be your forever storyteller and I will sing your songs. I will hold you in my heart memories. Our love cannot be killed by disease nor will it simply disappear into some questionable unknown. I have packed it carefully in tissue so you can carry it beyond with you and sprinkle it where love doesn't grow. ---- Ali . to her friend |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ali..your beauty and love for Cade shines in this outstanding piece of work.. hugs you tightly .. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You impress me with your devotion, Alison. Ida |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
A, Very touching, good job John |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Heartwrenching, dear Alison. The seeds of love planted in your heart will forever bloom. Beautiful, touching write. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, it is good to hurry the angels when one is feeling the night air around them..you bring lovely parting gifts |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
mmmm ... i know this feeling |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very touching. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, Love grows everywhere. Take my word for it. Nice work on this poem. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Roniece, Thank you for listening to me last night and making me laugh through my tears. Your friendship means so much to me. xoxoxo Ali ______ Ida, He is worth being devoted to. Thank you, Alison _______ John, Thank you and thank you for caring enough to drop me a line. I am doing good - you are a fine friend. Alison ________ Margherita, Maybe he will plant a garden of love in some arid areas, maybe? Thank you for the gentle response. I love your loving attitude. Love .. .xoxoxo Alison ________ D Thank you, my friend. You make me smile so often. A _______ EagleScorpion, Thank you for reading and understanding. Alison _______ Seoulair, Thank you. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to let me know that the poem touched you. Alison ________ Bobby, Thank you for reading. I disagree. I think that there are many places in the world that have no love. We already know of babies in orphanages world-wide who receive little physical care and no emotional care. That, my friend, is an example of a world with no love. Alison |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The answer is, Yes. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Cade will always be with you Alison... Always. This is beautiful and heartfelt... Tammy<333 |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Watch out for angels -- they're seldom what they seem....but if you do find a real one, hang on tight. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
soft and tender...with all the qualities you need to find in friendship...nice write |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
such a lovely expression of mutual devotion. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you all. Cade said he would - be my Guardian Angel, but you know -- I am not sure I want him watching me all the time. He can have the position (part time) if I get to set the hours. Love, Ali |
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