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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-04-05 12:11 PM


Will you be my Guardian Angel
and will you watch over me?
Will you whisper dreams in my ear?

I will be your forever storyteller
and I will sing your songs.
I will hold you in my heart memories.

Our love cannot be killed by disease
nor will it simply disappear
into some questionable unknown.

I have packed it carefully in tissue
so you can carry it beyond with you
and sprinkle it where love doesn't grow.

----

Ali
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to her friend

© Copyright 2008 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-04-05 12:23 PM


Ali..your beauty and love for Cade shines in this outstanding piece of work.. hugs you tightly .. love RDB  

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-04-05 01:19 AM


You impress me with your devotion, Alison.
                                   Ida

effjayel
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3 posted 2008-04-05 03:47 AM


A,  Very touching,  good job   John
Margherita
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4 posted 2008-04-05 05:46 AM


Heartwrenching, dear Alison. The seeds of love planted in your heart will forever bloom.

Beautiful, touching write.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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5 posted 2008-04-05 07:03 AM


ms ali-san, it is good to hurry the angels when one is feeling the night air around them..you bring lovely parting gifts
EagleScorpion
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6 posted 2008-04-05 04:19 PM


mmmm ... i know this feeling
Seoulair
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7 posted 2008-04-05 04:21 PM


very touching.
Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-04-05 06:29 PM


Alison,

Love grows everywhere.  Take my word for it.  

Nice work on this poem.

Bobby

Alison
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9 posted 2008-04-05 11:25 PM


Roniece,

Thank you for listening to me last night and making me laugh through my tears.  Your friendship means so much to me.

xoxoxo
Ali
______

Ida,

He is worth being devoted to.

Thank you,
Alison
_______

John,

Thank you and thank you for caring enough to drop me a line.  I am doing good - you are a fine friend.

Alison
________

Margherita,

Maybe he will plant a garden of love in some arid areas, maybe?  Thank you for the gentle response.  I love your loving attitude.

Love .. .xoxoxo
Alison
________

D

Thank you, my friend.  You make me smile so often.

A
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EagleScorpion,

Thank you for reading and understanding.

Alison
_______

Seoulair,

Thank you.  I appreciate you reading and taking the time to let me know that the poem touched you.

Alison
________

Bobby,

Thank you for reading.  I disagree.  I think that there are many places in the world that have no love.  We already know of babies in orphanages world-wide who receive little physical care and no emotional care.  That, my friend, is an example of a world with no love.

Alison

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10 posted 2008-05-01 11:46 AM


The answer is, Yes.




Larrysmom
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11 posted 2008-05-01 11:45 PM


Cade will always be with you Alison... Always.

This is beautiful and heartfelt...

Tammy<333

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12 posted 2008-05-02 12:40 PM


Watch out for angels -- they're seldom what they seem....but if you do find a real one, hang on tight.

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13 posted 2008-05-02 10:45 AM


soft and tender...with all the qualities you need to find in friendship...nice write
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14 posted 2008-05-03 09:19 AM


such a lovely expression of mutual devotion.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Alison
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15 posted 2008-05-04 12:36 PM


Thank you all.  

Cade said he would - be my Guardian Angel, but you know -- I am not sure I want him watching me all the time.  He can have the position (part time) if I get to set the hours.

Love,
Ali

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