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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-03-02 01:12 PM


Felix is
cold, hungry,
and miserable.  

There’s no heat.  

Mom’s gone crazy,
and thrown a beer can
through the front window.  

Felix isn’t old enough to know,
everyone doesn’t live that way.  

He just smiles, and
pays little mind
to discomfort.  

He’s been blest
with a ton of
good nature.

Bobby

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effjayel
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1 posted 2008-03-02 01:23 PM


I'm glad he smiled, just proves he has an indomitable nature,

John

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-03-02 01:24 PM


Now this is so moving, dear Bobby, it hurts.
Children find something to put their mind on even under the worst circumstances. Felix probably was expanding in a world of fantasy, while playing ... so he did not feel the cramps of hunger. And when parents go crazy, children tend to show their sensitive understanding in ways that amaze us.

Thank you, Bobby.

love this

Margherita

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3 posted 2008-03-02 01:35 PM


...and it is his "good nature" that has enabled Felix to not only survive his misfortunes, but to actually thrive!

He's a tough cookie, and tough cookies don't crumble! Mind you, inside he's sweet and mushy,  but he can't hide that from his fans!


Linda

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4 posted 2008-03-02 02:01 PM


Wow, Bobby. Tell Felix I can really relate to this one. My Mom had a pretty bad drinking problem and I never knew what to expect. She would be fine for a while and the go crazy and do some really off the wall things. She had a completely sad life and many demons and probably needed a level of psychiatric care that just wasn't available then. Maybe that was the case with Felix's Mom.
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5 posted 2008-03-02 02:17 PM


I think that Felix touches many of us.  

My father was bi polar.  I remember one day he got the axe and chopped up his wooden captain's chair.  That kind of stuff was just part of our 'normal' life.

Alison

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-03-02 04:26 PM


John,

Felix has to smile, if he wasn't able to smile he would indeed be in awful trouble.

As you say, Felix has to have an indomitable nature.  He's lucky that way.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2008-03-02 04:31 PM


Dear Margherita,

What you say is very true.  This was inspired by what a family in back of the house, and across the alley is going through.

I haven't yet figured out how to help them.  I'm working on it.  As I've said before, the hood full of Felix's.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-03-02 04:37 PM


Linda,

What you say is very true.  Felix's experiences have made him a very tough cookie--and that's the positive result of a very unfortunate history.  He's lucky that way.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-03-02 04:40 PM


Ida,

It's good you can relate to this.  I'm sure that is the problem with Felix's Mom.  

I'll let Felix know, it will help him to know he is not alone.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-03-02 04:43 PM


Alison,

It's good you can relate to this story.  Many of us can.

My Father was also a violent man.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-03-02 07:12 PM


I so love it when Felix smiles Bobby... just lovely... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-03-02 08:48 PM


Dear RDB,

You will be happy to know that Felix smiles quite a bit.  That's something he can afford to do, and he takes advantage of that.  He laughs too.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2008-03-03 05:16 AM


Fine writing...James
Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-03-03 08:20 AM


James,

Thanks for the kind words.  I'm happy you are enjoying the series.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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15 posted 2010-10-26 08:32 PM


Whether it is a blessing or not for Felix to be ignorant that the rest of the world does not suffer in the same way is an intriguing question.  Perhaps.....ignorance is bliss.
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