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Open Poetry #42

End of days

c_fuller
Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 52
california

0 posted 2008-04-03 09:01 PM

the sky is falling, and taking my
shadow with it.

but no one cares, not a soul.
and why should we?

as long as it doesnt fall on us
why would we care?

the earth is sinking,
no one cares, not a soul.

what is a soul, but an
echo of what we were,
when we cared, before we became
shadows.

and what is a shadow,
but an optic echo of
a once proud soldier
who marched against time
when the wind tasted like tears.

i am falling,
no one cares, not a soul.
and what am i,
but an echo of the shadow
of my youth,
when the world lived
and i did too.

oh to be a shadow again .....

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-04-03 09:47 PM

"when the world lived and I did too."
touching write.
Ida

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-04 12:07 PM

very good!!!love the read.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-04-04 05:52 AM

I like the way you express yourself... yes, I do indeed ...

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2008-04-04 04:53 PM

Oh, this speaks to me. You see,
I have a passion for souls
and shadows...

Thank you!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2008-04-04 05:04 PM

oh to be a shadow again

yes

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