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Open Poetry #42

Improving On Basho

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-03-29 11:18 PM

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An old man
A frog jumps in—

Sound of water

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2008-03-29 11:19 PM

Perfect!

j.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-03-29 11:24 PM

John,

Good luck on improving on Basho.

Bobby

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-03-29 11:55 PM

Old man drinks

A frog jumps in—

Sound of water

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2008-03-30 08:27 AM

An old frog
A fool falls in—

Sound of laughter.

[Sorry!]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2008-03-30 10:28 AM

the audacity!

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

6 posted 2008-03-30 06:22 PM

Sound of laughter

An old frog
A fool, hot water

[This message has been edited by Seoulair (03-30-2008 10:06 PM).]

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