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Answering Harvey |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Ah yes There was not One thing she said That would have made Einstein fall down Amazed Her eyes Were not stars— despite What some bad poet says And often they were blind In grocery aisles Or office corridors There were many others Far more physically beautiful As could make her disappear So what can I tell you My astonished friend That will help you Finally understand She was my girl . |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
"She was my girl" Nothing more needs to be said. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very, very lovely. indeed very lovely. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I do like this John! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very nice and meaningful poem.... thanks yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
She must have been a special person and I would say "It takes one to know one." Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
well 'writ!'... I am particularly fond of the beginning: "There was not One thing she said That would have made Einstein fall down" applause!! |
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