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Open Poetry #42
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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
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at the beach... i wish
0 posted 2008-03-28 12:48 PM

i lay away at night
trying to find a reason
for my beliveing
trying to find a reason
for your deciving
trying to find a reason
why all cant be alright

JJ
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Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-03-28 01:12 PM

Big life questions in a short poem. Good. Very good!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2008-03-28 02:33 PM

Nice writing...James
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
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at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-03-29 04:02 PM

thank you

JJ
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