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Enlightenment |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Enlightenment… is a lone-pine silhouette against an astonishing moon rising in a limpid field of lucent stars. ---b. e. adams (3/25/08) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Time, distance, superimposed within a field of internal awareness; sentient. Bravo! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is enlightenment for me. Ida |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Agreeing with Mr. Icebox. Well done!! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Startling imagery, speaking volumes in the breath of an epiphany! I am moved! Art |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Quintessential Zen, minimalism at its finest! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is a nice play on the vision. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
While waiting at a bus station recently there was such an amazingly beautiful indigo sky and pine branches hugged the almost full moon ... I stood in awe and thought that I could tolerate waiting when there was such magic in the sky ... You just brought this scene back in a masterful way, dear Bruce. It is enlightenment, yes. Love, Margherita |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Bruce, yet another stunning surreal image you have conjured up.It never ceases to amaze me how you do this with so few words...Much enjoyed John |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi secondhanddreampoet, your poem is also a painting, like if you paint with words, enjoyed it.... and there is full of an atmosphere too.... yann |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Beautiful poem. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, Your words are stunning in their simplicity. Beautiful imagry. Great job, my friend. A |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's my pleasure to bring this one back. |
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