Open Poetry #42 |
Co-operate |
scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
I see the azure earth, a wondrous place, and many orbs that whirl about in space as distant points of light transfix the skies and lend an inward focus to my eyes. I hear a voice that speaks of vanished dreams. The silence builds, a gulf to me it seems, between the given context and reality, but who can truly say what is to be? I sense a message written in the stars, a wisp of timid hope, a hint of wars. The text was clear, the message was succinct. Co-operate, or else become extinct. Speak your truth quietly and clearly; |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You brought this powerful message across very well! The message needs to be perceived and quickly too, you are right! And immediate action has to start! Co-operating on global level in favor of the survival of humanity, nothing less, yes. Very significant! Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful words....beautifuly expressed. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wise and thoughtful message, scoff. Well written. Ida |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
Thank you all for letting me make another ripple in the pond. Speak your truth quietly and clearly; |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I like the way it opens wide up, and crashes to a close. Sent my brain spiining with the planets. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Had a moment to catch up on some reading and chanced upon this. Wonderfully written advice. To the top! miscellanea |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes Scoff it is a great poem and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Take care. Lindsay |
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