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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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backside buicks backed in beauties with their chrome songs all down low in hover sway we were the children men with our rings of silver and our leather memories leaning on scarface's concrete stogieing up a saturday evening without any morality on just loose change exposure hanging our males like mules waiting for a handful sinner to come speak easy want to's and leave us empty urges like the shadows on our shirts always craving that highway jesus ______________ daark..scribblenote..ya really got to ride this patch to wear this scribble.. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I think i would like a ride on your harley one day Mr Daark...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b, you would enjoy the ride..but some of the places I go might blush you..thanks ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
waiting for a handful sinner to come speak easy want to's and leave us empty urges like the shadows on our shirts always craving that highway jesus I think I understand this one even without riding that patch, D.! A tough story told with mastery again and with the consciousness of the vacuity of certain experiences that leave one craving for other "peaks". love Margherita |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I loved loitering in your boots here, Dark One. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
quite dark of "self-pity". Ah how "pathetic" How interesting it is to expect you to write Blue Bamboo again and again with the knowledge that your are a DARK stranger. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you for watching this one ms ____________ ms kahlil, thanks lady friend, enjoyed your eyes on this scribble _____________ friend tommark..actually just a get together of some old scooter trash doing reruns, couple of them are from Lancaster too..thanks guy _____________ AWind, thank you for letting me take some of your time with this one |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, D. This is pretty amazing writing. I am liking it lots. Most good, my friend. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..thanks babe..you smile me |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Now I am REALLy smilin' ecspecially when I read the last part...thank you for the smiles....  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
can see you there with that black beauty, just hangin and cravin...can hear her thundering down the street now... this just makes me wanna ride, darkdaddy..  |
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