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Winter Void |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Winter Void beyond barren hills the last lonely cloud dances in a cold sunset |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful poem as always。 Above Wilson Peak The first evening star twinkles Fresh pink gets glitered TM |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed the contrast between your original 'Zenku' and TM's reply! Bruce: beyond barren hills the last lonely cloud dances in a cold sunset TM: Above Wilson Peak The first evening star twinkles Fresh pink gets glittered |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, same hour perceived differently ... Beautiful vision, dear Bruce, I love the stillness and even the cold that you evoke, it's the longing for what seems absent, but isn't really, you know. Loved also Tom's contribution, very lovely. love Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You captured the in-between of storm and reverence. Perfect cadence for this subtle moment. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I feel the cold and stillness. Nice work! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
the last lonely cloud dances in a cold sunset.." I can just picture the cold Sunset behind some mountains ARCTIC WIND |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Yes, this is the capturing of a very subtle transitional moment. As you read it, you can imagine breathing in the cold air and exhaling it warmly. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, Ah, another winter worshipper. Winter plays an enormous part in shaping the destiny and character, of northern people. Not always for the good. It’s just a matter of survival. It’s sad, but so true. Poor US and Russia. This short poem is well done. Good work. Bobby |
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