Open Poetry #42 |
Peace |
LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
PEACE Peace is when the moonlight Filters softly through the leaves, When the breezes gently murmur As they sigh among the eaves. Peace is when the firelight Flickers softly out of sight, When the embers finally vanish In the stillness of the night. Peace is moonlight on the water, Twilight on the never ending plain, Where you hear the curlew’s eerie calling And the cricket’s sharp refrain. Peace is a far off distant camp-fire With the gumleaves burning bright, To hear a dingo’s lonely calling In the distance of the night. Peace is just a little girl With head nestled on your chest When she whispers , oh so softly, Dad, I love you the best. Peace is just an easy chair When a hard day’s work is oe’r, And your wife brings out your slippers And an evening drink what's more. Peace is clean sheets and pillow cases When you come home tired at night, With the weekend round the corner And not a job in sight. Peace has many faces And last but not the least, Is when you go to meet your maker When life at last has ceased. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lindsay, This is beautiful. I remember sleeping out under the stars one night when driving through Canada on the way home. It was late and we were tired - the night was warm, no mosquitoes, so we lay out in the moss and listened to the wolves howl. It was beautiful and -- it was "Peace". Alison |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A beautiful, peaceful write, Lindsay. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I really enjoyed this Lindsay my friend, one of your best I am sure. Have a great day and take care. Chat soon. Rick |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Lindsay, I agree with Rick, you summed this up perfectly Thanks for sharing it John |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is so you, LP. You're such a gentleman and a gentle man. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Thanks to my very good friends, Alison, Midnitesun, Rick, John and Alison for your very kind remarks. Have a wonderful Easter and may the good Lord smile upon you. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, my dear Aussie friend! I too, have experienced such peaceful moments and your serene poem brought so many of them back to me. However, for me it was a coyote's eerie calling instead of a curlew and a loon's lonely calling instead of a dingo. However, I never had a wife to bring me my slippers in the evening. May peace be with you ~ on Earth, as it is in Heaven. Love & Easter blessings, Linda |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Wow....this is so lovely. Perfect wording & tempo makes it flow off the tongue. Nice job. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
peace is such a beautiful thing, let's not spoil it...Wonderful and wise poem. yann |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Peace is a beautiful poem that makes you happy. |
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