Open Poetry #42 |
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Head |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia ![]() |
I deal with my head Be thankful you only deal with yours There is Time in my head There is a world in my head That I rarely deal with Due to dealing with my head Which takes so much time There is a wife in my head Who requires more Time that I cannot give except in my head But my head takes up my time There are children who I give more Time to but not as much as I feel I should In my head There is a head in my head that fills all time and space I am sorry If I seem to neglect getting to you But please know that you are in my head |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
XOx Uriah xOX, This is well, and cleverly worked out. You must have done it in your head. It is an enjoyable read. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (03-17-2008 08:54 AM).] |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
A most interesting piece. It is reflective, philosophical, and tinged with angst. It ends on a lighthearted note, and that is the best aspirin for the human head. Thanks for posting it. regards, shirtless poetry podcasts, blogs and[ photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Enjoyed very much... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I barely have enough time to handle what is in my one head ~ but you have two of them! ~ Double the trouble! ![]() If I were you, I would put one head to bed! lol ![]() Linda |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Now I got a headache trying to get my head around it...Nice job, I enjoyed it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! HAPPY ST.PATRICK'S DAY ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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