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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-03-16 04:52 PM

If You Wonder Why

you have my heart
its very breath
a life without
is dancing death
the bridge between
oceans wide
you are the calm
within the tide
finger prints that have
stained my skin
inside a soul
echo within
you are my want
my very desire
my words for you
my inspire

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-03-16 05:09 PM

Nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-03-16 05:45 PM

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-03-16 07:20 PM

Dear 1slick_lady,

This one works for me right up to the last line. I'd think about that last line. It's presently kinda hanging out there.

Bobby

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-03-16 08:45 PM

Very Beautiful Indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-03-17 12:46 PM

Nice work, John

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

6 posted 2008-03-17 03:32 PM

Deep poem with fingers passion.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2008-06-19 03:33 AM

"you have my heart
its very breath
a life without
is dancing death
the bridge between
oceans wide
you are the calm
within the tide"

This is beautiful, Helen...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2008-06-22 10:22 AM

I always love reading you slick lady~

This is so pretty~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2008-06-22 11:03 AM

Oh Helen! This is very nice! The way it rolls off the tongue is divine!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2008-06-22 02:59 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2008-06-25 10:09 PM

perfection!

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