Open Poetry #42 |
If You Wonder Why |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
If You Wonder Why you have my heart its very breath a life without is dancing death the bridge between oceans wide you are the calm within the tide finger prints that have stained my skin inside a soul echo within you are my want my very desire my words for you my inspire "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear 1slick_lady, This one works for me right up to the last line. I'd think about that last line. It's presently kinda hanging out there. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Beautiful Indeed! ARCTIC WIND |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Nice work, John |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Deep poem with fingers passion. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"you have my heart its very breath a life without is dancing death the bridge between oceans wide you are the calm within the tide" This is beautiful, Helen... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I always love reading you slick lady~ This is so pretty~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Helen! This is very nice! The way it rolls off the tongue is divine! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfection! |
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