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The spirit |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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It’s the spirit of the dark inside a dreamer’s mind who issues forth soft whispers as if it really cares to turn the lover inside me out into the light. And it’s not as if I care to find the brakes in my distaste when knowing they’re not there or to force the straight and narrow in place of round-abouts. So today it stands before me washed and ready, new robed in no dismay at what life has thrown away because the spirit of the dark is all my love of you eternal in the essence of a woman’s mind! Helen / 10 March 2008 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good read for my morning |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
as if it really cares to turn the lover inside me out into the light. That would be a good thing, dear Helen, if only for you! Love loves the light, because it IS the light. Dark spirit whispers can confuse. As usual thought provoking, beautifully written. Love. Margherita  |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
This is beautiful. Love the read. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks everyone for your kind comments. Helen |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am particularly fond of the beginning of this fine 'write!': "It’s the spirit of the dark inside a dreamer’s mind who issues forth soft whispers as if it really cares to turn the lover inside me out into the light." applause!! |
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