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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Yes As simple as that In warm sun A gray squirrel— Eating French fries . |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Peaceful picture, indeed. Joyce |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice picture of spring, John. Ida |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Crossed the single eye of smiling moon!!!!behind the blue curtain.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love spring! too ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am especially fond of this 'write!' It is not only effective American 'Zen minimalism' in general... capturing a fine transient ('slice of life') moment in the cycle of seasons...but, it also delimits how life typically 'finds an way' (how Gaia's creatures adapt to the eccentricities and 'culinary inventions' of humans; etc.) applause! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Too cool! And I agree with Bruce too. Love. Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Simply, well done! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
YES ! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Huan Yi, This paints a nice picture of a person sitting in the park, feeding a gray squirrel French fries, in the warm spring sun. I don't think I could ever do that, as I'm very greedy, and I like fries, but who knows. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I wanted to pay another 'official visit' to this particular 'write!'... continuing applause for the initial 'penning' and many of the rather interesting 'comment/reply' posts! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this makes me think of the days I spent on the campus, hand feeding the squirrels there. I even had names for them. And yes, they loved french fries. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I would like to see this penning "Spring" back to the top of the "P.I.P.-land" queue! additional applause!! [be the squirrel!] |
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