Open Poetry #42 |
ascend of a human |
poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Ascend of a human -------------------- (To margarita) A yellow star with love and power shines. Rays are all I need at this moment of Cactus grown on the uterus of mind. To the sun I rise from the sea of white. Depressions are dense water fathomless. From my hair the salt of grief dropping still. Golden sand spreads a promised land to rest. Nostril flows with light smell of fish and boats. I remove the embrace of sea-algae. The sand alone witness the love’s ascend And, air brings the white cloth as my cover. Welcome me. I am human again. clever talks delay friendship! |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
So beautifully soft tuned. To our dearest lady You are a very kind poet. my dear friend. Love thins one. Very tender. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
I am sure Margherita will smell the salt breezes of the Bay of Naples in this Ku... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Depressions are dense water fathomless. ~*~ I like the depth of that line. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You bless me, dear Ku, with your inspired poem! I welcome you back within the light. Sometimes we experience this kind of momentaneous depression you describe here so intensely. It does happen and in the joy of "ascending" above darkness again there is immense reward for the soul. I will keep this beauty, dear Ku, and cherish it. Love, Margherita |
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