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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Submissive. Yes I've always liked the man with power, hard muscles and soft confess, big blue eyes that let you know the package has a bomb in it. But I suppose I need to change my ways after being blown up so many times. I'm getting much too old to be going through my days in pieces of unfinished rhymes. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I especially liked the last line. Joyce |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dixie, I feel like I am chanting a mantra but your strength shows. You can do what you want - because you have a great deal of inner strenght. It shines through your poetry. Alison |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo, Passing shadows, Nice work on this poem. "You have a problem with hazel eyes, or what?" Bobby |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
dixie, are you living my life on a parallel plane, or am I living yours? I swear, girl, you write what I feel so many times. I love reading you! Sheli |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You might still go on loving this type of man, but maybe you will need a stronger shield to not let your heart getting hurt. There are kind, sweet, comprehensive men, so lovable that you might think he is the right one to create a life bond. And then you will be grateful no doubt for the virtuous aspects, yet bored to death. There must be a golden middle way!! You always make us think and ponder over your beautiful, insightful poems, dear Dixie. love and hugs Margherita  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...WOW...This is really great. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed! Dixie! ARCTIC WIND |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, this line gave me a smile my friend. big blue eyes that let you know the package has a bomb in it. very well expressed. I enjoyed the read Dixie, all the pieces are coming together ok. Rick |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Dixie It seems to me you have all the pieces require to finish the puzzle, now go de-fuse the situation...! John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks everyoneglad you enjoyed this piece |
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