»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #42
»
There Was........
| Open Poetry #42 |
|
There Was........ |
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
There was time, When love arrive in autumn, There was time when all the leaves fell on the ground, There was time When I was alone, At times, During the storms, Over the time, During the time, I try to smile and ask my heart, About this love , There was you In my heart, I knew, At a time that love stood still, At my doorstep, Once I was there for you, When you were in trouble, And there was love stood at my doorstep, Thinking you could open my heart There was our love And there was our story There was our love standing still And there was ...... |
||
| © Copyright 2008 vandana - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Vandana, glad to see you post again. I have been waiting for a new one & you did not disappoint. Thanks for sharing this one....John |
||
|
LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
wonderful poem. wonderful. When some is singing death you sing love in Autumn. Love never dies. great poem! |
||
|
LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great post Vandana, so much enjoyed even though a little sad. Have a great day my friend. Lindsay |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And there was... love. Vandana... You've been a long time coming to something good. In life, in writing, in fact. This is good.  |
||
|
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Vandana, I very much like the thoughts expressed in this poem. It takes me back to a time when someone very dear to me was there for me when I was in loads of trouble. Keep up the good writing. Bobby |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
