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Over Fill |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Over Fill a letter to whom it may concern on flowing cotton ivory sheets formed of the deepest black words of never to be read swirls stop in distant wind abruptly short of the howling gray rain it pours in sunlight a place of forgotten comfort I use to like the droplet rain to wash layers unsettled dust it’s just a collected crying sky soaking way beneath the skin each drop filling small spaces to the point of over fill "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Beautiful. Your classical poem. love the read and enjoy the feeling of reading it. Always good. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Helen, I felt like this last night, good job I enjoyed the read... John |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Agree with ladytom, my friend.... jimmy |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
S_L, Your words are like a free-form waltz across my mind... spilling over into the moment. Indigo |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
1slick_lady, This is a good stream of consciousness poem. It works well, and is very interesting. Bobby |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
this flows so nicely I like it |
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