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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2008-03-06 08:39 PM

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At night
Her rain drops—
Fall slowly


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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-03-06 08:45 PM

they do
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
2 posted 2008-03-06 08:47 PM

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Ah Helen,
anytime I've touched you
I know I've done well . . .

Thank you


John

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LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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LA, CA
3 posted 2008-03-06 09:02 PM

Everything goes slowly so we can have a decent taste of them.
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-03-06 10:19 PM

Huan Yi,

This is very pretty.  What form is this?

Bobby
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5 posted 2008-03-07 02:47 AM

Makes one think, John.
                 Ida
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