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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2007-08-19 06:28 PM



Down at Big Mommas house in New Orleans
The whiskey was strong and the girls were clean
The dice fully loaded, the cards neatly stacked
The cigars were burning, the parlor was packed
The gentlemen callers were wealthy and loud
The women they paid, sashayed through the crowd
Hour after hour, they'd go off in pairs
Giggling and flirting while climbing the stairs

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aziza
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1 posted 2007-08-20 09:20 PM


Tina

I think this got lost in the crowd of poems because I think it is good.  I liked it a lot.

A

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2 posted 2008-01-21 04:25 PM


This is very interesting. enjoyed.
                           Ida

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-01-21 07:04 PM


Enjoyed Very Much!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

TinaTrivett
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4 posted 2008-01-22 01:34 PM


Thanks.
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