Open Poetry #41 |
Big Mommas House |
TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Down at Big Mommas house in New Orleans The whiskey was strong and the girls were clean The dice fully loaded, the cards neatly stacked The cigars were burning, the parlor was packed The gentlemen callers were wealthy and loud The women they paid, sashayed through the crowd Hour after hour, they'd go off in pairs Giggling and flirting while climbing the stairs |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Tina I think this got lost in the crowd of poems because I think it is good. I liked it a lot. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is very interesting. enjoyed. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed Very Much!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks. |
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