Open Poetry #41 |
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He Sailed(Magnus/TD duet} |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
He sailed in search of beauty, her vision he did see. A dainty buxom honey, her name was Anna Lee. The waters did flow by there, along the windblown shore Outside the window nightly, He ached for her once more. Her hair the shade of midnight, her skin of opal gleam Into his arms she took flight, their eyes locked in a dream Ignited stars bowed silent, as fire trailed her hand In moments born to morning light took place ‘pon the sand This sailor quite a fellow, discerned the wind to sail That filled this woman Anna in gasps exhalt to trail His shoulders gleamed as steel, his lips of wanting scent Entwined the breath of ecstacy ceased as their essence spent The willows sweep did touch them and brought from each comply As stars did touch the heavens in wait a lover's sigh. And as the moon did follow the sun 'neath shadows grew He sailed in search of beauty....as love did find these two |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Barry and TD, you did a wonderful job. Such poetic passionate intensity! I love your duets always! love Margherita ![]() |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is one poignant poem Magnus and so tenderly written. Loved it. Keep them coming. much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Margherita and LindsayP... I must give at least half of the credit to my partner in this venture (ThisDiamond) aka TD...Kathy is quite good and writes most of the tenderness that you see. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Two talents ~ one pen! Seamless! You two du-et so well, together. ![]() Beautifully romantic! I do so enjoy your poetic collaborations! Loving hug to each of you, ![]() ![]() Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words sailed smoothly past my lips ![]() M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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