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Magnus
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0 posted 2008-01-20 03:44 PM


He sailed in search of beauty, her vision he did see.
A dainty buxom honey, her name was Anna Lee.
The waters did flow by there, along the windblown shore
Outside the window nightly, He ached for her once more.

Her hair the shade of midnight, her skin of opal gleam
Into his arms she took flight, their eyes locked in a dream
Ignited stars bowed silent, as fire trailed her hand
In moments born to morning light took place ‘pon the sand
This sailor quite a fellow, discerned the wind to sail
That filled this woman Anna in gasps exhalt to trail
His shoulders gleamed as steel, his lips of wanting scent
Entwined the breath of ecstacy ceased as their essence spent

The willows sweep did touch them and brought from each comply
As stars did touch the heavens in wait a lover's sigh.
And as the moon did follow the sun 'neath shadows grew
He sailed in search of beauty....as love did find these two


© Copyright 2008 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-20 06:05 PM


Barry and TD, you did a wonderful job. Such poetic passionate intensity!

I love your duets always!

love
Margherita

LindsayP
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2 posted 2008-01-20 08:10 PM



That is one poignant poem Magnus and so tenderly written. Loved it. Keep them coming. much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Magnus
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3 posted 2008-01-20 08:23 PM


Thanx Margherita and LindsayP... I must give
at least half of the credit to my partner
in this venture (ThisDiamond) aka TD...Kathy
is quite good and writes most of the tenderness
that you see.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-01-21 11:15 AM


Two talents ~ one pen! Seamless! You two du-et so well, together.

Beautifully romantic!

I do so enjoy your poetic collaborations!

Loving hug to each of you,



Linda

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5 posted 2008-01-21 05:31 PM


Your words sailed smoothly past my lips     an excellent duet~~

M

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6 posted 2008-01-22 03:13 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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