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When The Wind Has Its Way
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When The Wind Has Its Way |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
When The Wind Has Its Way Air-dry the bubbles of my bath Arousing fragrant aftermath I belong to the wind Popping a button in reach of a leaf Riding the seasons a racing relief Love made under breath of the sky When the wind has its way, so will I Moving fingers through my hair Against the sun in fountain fair Across my face to bribe a smile Costumed mustache blown beguile Paint my cheeks in rays, solar style I would rather take the chance When the wind has its way, feelings dance Moved in unison as breezed romance Just because I linger calm in relevance Doesn’t mean your pigeons hold intelligence For the wind knows the secrets of the night This would gust a full forever to be right I belong to the wind Copyright Kkh 8/19/07 |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
Lovely. Amd the rhymes were so unique. I particularly enjoyed "when the wind has its way, so will I" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The wind does have its way...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A pleasant ‘read’…grand lines and imagery: I love: “I belong to the wind”; “Popping a button in reach of a leaf”; “Moving fingers through my hair… …Across my face to bribe a smile”; “When the wind has its way, feelings dance”; And, especially fine: “the wind knows the secrets of the night(!)”; "When the wind has its way, so will I(!)" Applause!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Costumed mustache blown beguile Paint my cheeks in rays, solar style I would rather take the chance When the wind has its way, feelings dance" Another wonderful menagerie of words: if that could be possible you always manage to do just that. JL  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is absolutely beautiful. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed! Maybe when the "will" has it's way we will all fly with the wind. |
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