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Break Free |
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greeneggs-n-ham Junior Member
since 2007-06-05
Posts 14 |
well, this is a song that i wrote. I havent been writing much lately. But i wrote this the other day and thought i would share it with you guys. Its a song, so there is a rhythm and stuff to it. Im learning to play the guitar, when i do i want to learn to write music for my lyrics. anyway, whatcha think? Break Free My tears run down Sting my cheeks In my sorrow filled soul I need somewhere to go I need to find A way to break free To find my way alone Has led me far from home I was falling Falling down And I was drowning Fight to get out Fight to know The way to go And time will tell The truth before I fell My feet carry me Away from you As I wander away You ask me to stay But my ears Shut you out Left alone in the dark looking for the spark I was falling Falling down And I was drowning Fight to get out Fight to know The way to go And time will tell The truth before I fell My eyes look down I can’t look in your face Your glory surrounds And your love abounds I want to see you Want to know you How could this be Why couldn’t I see That I was falling Falling down And I was drowning Fight to get out Fight to know The way to go And time will tell The truth before I fell |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a lovely song and the rhythm is there! Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely indeed... I hope you do well with finding the right tune... it will be beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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