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greeneggs-n-ham
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since 2007-06-05
Posts 14


0 posted 2008-01-21 05:21 PM



well, this is a song that i wrote. I havent been writing much lately. But i wrote this the other day and thought i would share it with you guys.
Its a song, so there is a rhythm and stuff to it.
Im learning to play the guitar, when i do i want to learn to write music for my lyrics.
anyway, whatcha think?
Break Free

My tears run down
Sting my cheeks
In my sorrow filled soul
I need somewhere to go
I need to find
A way to break free
To find my way alone
Has led me far from home

I was falling
Falling down
And I was drowning
Fight to get out
Fight to know
The way to go
And time will tell
The truth before I fell

My feet carry me
Away from you
As I wander away
You ask me to stay
But my ears
Shut you out
Left alone in the dark
looking for the spark

I was falling
Falling down
And I was drowning
Fight to get out
Fight to know
The way to go
And time will tell
The truth before I fell

My eyes look down
I can’t look in your face
Your glory surrounds
And your love abounds
I want to see you
Want to know you
How could this be
Why couldn’t I see

That I was falling
Falling down
And I was drowning
Fight to get out
Fight to know
The way to go
And time will tell
The truth before I fell

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-01-22 07:01 PM


This is a lovely song and the rhythm is there!

Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-01-23 05:05 AM


lovely indeed... I hope you do well with finding the right tune... it will be beautiful!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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