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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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what to do when the foot sets itself on the rug the foot of the bed feels the touch of a toe and the person alights puts a bodily weight is there a party today? on an ever so precious mechanism hinged at the ankle shift, maneuver graces his way to a slit in the lower door a canister for mail future stands in print a party cometh the man is merely erect and the search for right letters continues among the bills spoiled invitations wrong addresses tax solicitations to pay on-line lo and behold there is a light from one such post a party light for clumsy foreign actors in the company yet at odds with evermore clumsier crowds outside of loose invitations concentrated at his foot in the door of a host he will tip-toe in sample a sherry small talk and leave richer for himself poorer crowds being ill to receive. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Martin, this is an intriguing write. I see a little more of the scene every time I read it. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Very interesting write. And I love the first S. I could picture it. Enjoyed Tom |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Martin... I so enjoyed this! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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